Active Video Game Exercise Training Improves the Clinical Control of Asthma in Children: Randomized Controlled Trial
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4 peopleMara Chenmara.chen@example.orgLead · Internal review
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Dr. Lena Ortizlena.ortiz@example.orgReviewer · External reviewers
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4 totalDr. Lena OrtizPlease keep the summary clear that this was an 8-week pediatric exercise-training trial, not a medication efficacy study.Abstract objective
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Dr. Sofia MartinezWhen we summarize Table 1, please say both groups improved ACQ-6, while FeNO reduction was reported only in the video-game group.Table 1 outcomes
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Mara ChenSource check: PLOS DOI, trial registration NCT01438294, funding statement, and CC BY license are visible in the paper.Citation and license
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Dr. Robert KimTone down the final review note around the conclusion. The limitations note says energy expenditure may be underestimated and game intensity could not be individualized.Limitations and conclusion
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